* week 6. 7월 29일
* 수업 내용
1.essay 평가 및 수정
1) essay
Make poket money by stock investment.
Money is very important in life. Of course it's not object, it's process in life.
After university graduation, I get a job in a small business. And My income is very small.
I begin to think which change my income from small to big.
'1,000,000 won make a 10,000,000 won in recent months!',
'Price-earnings ratio is 300%!',
'Do you wanna be rich? The best way is to start it!'
TV, newspaper, internet etc, various medias said that. Finally I start to the stock investment form March, 2014.
To date, I never lost my money. I guess I'm a lucky guy. But my reason of make a money is that size the opportunities.
What's the opportunities? How to size the opportunities? I'll say it to you. Don't forget it. What I write about are real life experiences.
First, allow me to explain what stock investment is simply. We take stocks in the stock company.
We can buying and selling the stock in stock market. Sometimes you can get big money by buying an interest in that stock company.
On the other hand, you lose the big money.
The business of stock company cames on well with the result that stock of company has risen in value.
Selling the stock when stocks is expensive, buying the stocks when stocks is inexpensive.
We realized a profit from the sale of our stocks.
A good investor must know when to buy and sell stocks, which is not always easy to figure out.
It is stock investment.
The stock investment was influenced by the time, season,disease, incident, nature, politics of social.
Because all things happen in the social. The same is true for my opportunities in stock investment.
First opportunity is concern with ‘time’.
Second opportunity is concern with ‘disease’.
Third opportunity is concern with ‘politic’
What do the opportunity has in common?
What happened in social issue, also the more people engage in the issue, the more stock value relation between issue go up in price.
If you want to earn lots of money by stock investment, you should take more interest in the social issue. and We always hear advice on when to buy a stock.
Don’t forget it. There is no knowing what the future may bring forth, but we can prepare for the future.
I hope this writing is of some help to you. Thank you.
2) 평가 항목
- Does the essay have a correctly formatted title?
- Is the body formatted correctly?
- Is there a clear hook?
-is there sufficient background / connecting info?
- Does the thesis statement clearly state what will come?
- Does each body paragraph have a topic sentence?
- Do all following sentences directly support the ts?
- Does the conclusion restate the ThS in different words?
- Are there any clear errors that you could correct?
- Is there unity and coherence throughout the paper?
- CM''s to look for
: formatting / word rep / contractions / S&V agreement / informal language / 1st , 2nd person
parallel structure (US vs UK) / brain farts
* If this were a graded assignment, what grade would you give this essay? _____
3) 평가 및 수정
- 동료의 평가.
- 교수의 수정
- 동료의 평가와 교수의 수정 사항을 반영하여 더 나은 에세이를 완성해야 함.
2. presentation
- human library. the gun. cyber attack.
- 아래 'hunman libray' 에 대한 발표는 본인이 하였음.
'script' 와 'ppt' 가 궁금하신 분들은 첨부파일을 확인하길 바람.
human library(me).pptx
Materials Of Presentation(ver.eng).hwp
3. 과제
- 동료와 교수의 조언을 바탕으로 에세이를 수정하여
구글 드라이브에 올릴 것. 반.드.시.
* 오늘의 단어
- wild pig : 멧돼지
